Raging, fire inside
Igniting nerve endings lit
She is my passion.
Author notes
The senryu is a Japanese form also. It has the same line structure as the haiku. The subject matter is human nature. It can be ironic or satiric.
Line 1 contains 5 syllalbes
Line 2 contains 7 syllables
Line 3 contains 5 syllables
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awww Jems m'Lady
fanx You this is awsome
xxx Your angel xxx
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hugggggs as long as you smile for Me angel, I'll write da words.
YLD
xxxJemxxx
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You write a fantastic senryu. Well done. I like these little gems and you will find it is a pleasure to link them in chains of meaning too.
These words filled me
then a breeze stole my breath
life is a gift.
Fill my nights with your
moans and your lessons to learn,
this is love.
Write your passion
in the fashion of a poet
never fail for words.
See, these are fun to do. -
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ya it was fun, and a nice break from my battle with 10 lines of trochaic octameter
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