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The Rose Garden (Assignment: Haiku)


Red, white, rosebuds grow
Satin petals open out
Blossoms flower bright.

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Haiku

This Japanese form of syllable poetry is a non-rhyming poem about nature. The word nature is never used but is alluded to by using words usually descriptive of seasons For example: snow for winter; red leaves for autumn; peony scent for summer; new buds for spring. With nature as its theme it should present a clear and vivid picture, a mental image which arouses an emotion and triggers a spiritual insight.

It contains three lines with a syllable count as follows:

Line 1 contains 5 syllalbes
Line 2 contains 7 syllables
Line 3 contains 5 syllables

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  • The Poetic Angel
    April 22, 2008
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    oh Jems m'Lady this is butiful

    xxx Your angel xxx