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Black Roses & Purple Hearts


What’s that I see on the thorn bush
Many luminary thorny Black Roses
The wind coiling through the trees went swoosh
In the wind a Black Rose flew
Shivering as the freezing wind loomed over me
Clear sapphire water came from rope-like hoses
I sat there wondering why the water was on
Until I saw him through the water
His thick lanky blonde hair was smooth enough to almost pet
The fire like sunset sank below highstones
Causing the world to begin to dim
Looking up his chocolate brown eyes wanted to make me melt
Staring at those eyes I try not to cry
My body felt like fire as our purple hearts met
A floating cloud passed by in the sky
The Black Rose flew by as we kissed good-bye
Watching him disappear we broke apart
Unable to hold on any longer I sit down and cry
Knowing he came back just to see me one last time
A last crystal tear falls from my face
Watching my last tear fall on his grave
My Fragile saddened purple heart has a crack in it
Wishing we had enough time to fully say goodbye

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  • Shadow-Kissed
    May 5, 2008

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    Awwww

    I'm crying litterally. This is really good. I spotted Highstones in there...lol It definantly caught my attention. The end was amazing and heart-braking, I felt like I was experiencing it with them. Well Done