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A Home Town of Solitude

Nature is as nature does
I walk on through the moor
To sit among the bed that was
A heavenly god made door

To pick my pen and write from thus
Of the shimmering beauty I see
Just so I can later discuss
How it can never match to thee

The darling beds of roses by
Fly among the flowers
How I wish that I could die
Among these April showers

To enjoy one's solitude
The remoteness of these hills
Is to express the beatitude
Of the passing by of the rill's

I sit and watch life go by
And never care to stop
Hang over mountains edge
Until I dare to drop

As I watch this wild garden grow
I hunger to express
The need to tell of what I know
Of this wondrous mess

Nature is what I intend
to write until I'm gone
To keep recording to the end
To look of each new dawn.

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  • rufina caraid silver member
    April 29

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    Some of your word choices are just superb. I actually enjoy reading 'Olde' english so to find it here in your poem and some of the others in this contest has been manna from heaven for me. Well done. ~Von~Oldpoetry

  • raspberry Greeters member
    April 29

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    You have made a good attempt here dear.. thanks for this.. Do keep reading old poets, they teach us a lot!! Good luck in the contest..


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    April 22

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    Thank you for this entry.
    It has a nice feel to it and though the rhythm stumbles in places as you endeavour to maintain your selected rhye scheme the overall impression is good.