cobalt blue soul of sinful splendor
immerses passion's light and becomes
a whispering violet aura
the sensual heat was a naked form to
hold the touch of desire
Author notes
quote
"Cradle me, old man."
Rainier Maria Rilke
A contest entry
- Quote Inspiration. by Puking Faerie Dust.
1200 points, ended May 19, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This seemed very dreamy and mystical, with vivid imagery that drew me into the poem though it was so very short. The only thing that put it off a bit for me was that I can't really see how the prompt inspired this, though I really don't mind. I can never write with prompts because it ends up totally different.
But anyway, thank you for entering, and good luck 
Jeanette*~ -
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thanks
only references to touching, holding, etc. as in the quote . . -
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Aaah, I see now! Very nice take on the prompt
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