The Angels had a party
Up in heaven late last night
And hid behind the shaded moon
From the early morning light
Wanting to escape the anger
And avoid his vengeful wrath
They stole away the shaded moon
Holding in every snicker and laugh
Leaving the moon and planets behind
They raced to the nearest star
Found a cozy planet of spirits
And walked into the Sunrise Bar
They sidled up and over the stools
Feathers must, loose falling down
They all tucked in their tuckered wings
And ordered up their very first round!
A shot and a beer, removed all their fears
Of Demonic temptation across the bar
Black, Blonde and Red, slipped Satan’s bed
Like the Angels, they ran to this star
To play with such things, would singe their wings
But they were smokin’ red hot in those jeans
Their velvet red vests, exploding with breasts
Had chaste Angels, as horny, as teens
Bodies swaying, to the music playing
Their fiery loins about to explode
To hell with sin and they all jumped in
To each other, they were pie a-la-mode
Fornicating, brought Satan’s berating
While God pontificated over their sin’s
All the while, they fought back a smile
From the trouble, they’d put themselves in!
Opposites attract, it’s just a plain fact
We’ve had this trouble before
I can’t allow this, Satan said with a hiss
Home you bitches, I’m bolting the door
Author notes
One day when I was waiting to get a tooth pulled at the dentist I thought this is heaven and hell. Then I thought all of one or the other would most likely get a little boring after a wile. Thats how the idea for this poem started.
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A contest entry
- Angels/Devils..... by Walking Oxymoron.
700 points, ended November 16, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Demon or Angel... by azlyn.
619 points, ended May 29, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Heaven, Your Hell (Entertain Me!) by DistilledGin.
550 points, ended June 19, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I WANT A BIT OF FUNNY by superbanana.
1100 points, ended October 28, 14 entries
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Comments
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But I swear, BluesMan, us angels
are VERRRRRYYYYYY good 
This is a great piece!
Loved it and for very obvious reasons
Thank you for the smiles; may you have a heavenly day! -
This was a very nicely written piece you have here. I enjoyed reading this. It was very amusing. Thank you for entering and bst of luck too you in the contest.
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This was awesome! I enjoyed every minute of this! Excellent imagery and emotions. 
WOW! BRAVO! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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very imaginative!
thanks
XO
Cyb -
lol i liked this. it was really good. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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lol
It most certainly is entertaining! Great job and good luck in my contest!
~Gin
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This is so creative and a delightful read! Thank you so much for the entry!
Az
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what a piece of poetry, sounds like you were under the influence lol. thank you for this entry...good luck
Linda
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Thanks for the laughs. Well written,
nicely rhymed. Sounds like an office
party, two bosses disapproving...
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This has wonderful rhyme and imagery!! I enjoyed it very much and had to stop a couple of times to laugh. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for entering,
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this was really interesting, and kept me thinking. thanks for sharing
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Too Hot for hell, huh?
LOL!
I like it,
like the twist at the end, the idea of birds doing the deed,
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Well, well, well...someone certainly has an active imagination! This was cute, even with the racy lines. Thanks for the entry.
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actually I can say I do like this. I like the beginning where the angels have the party and are hiding. I like the story that this tells. This is a good write and deserves a trophy. Thanks for entering it into my contest and thanks for sharing it with us.
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LOL! Super rhymes!
Good luck in the contest!
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Cute write. Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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hi thought this was funny and good thanks for entering good luck
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Oh my, you've added so much sex I'm almost starting to get affected here!
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Funny!
Opposites attract, it’s just a plain fact
We’ve had this trouble before
I can’t allow this, Satan said with a hiss
Home you bitches, I’m bolting the door
Very funny. Great creativity! Well done. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck! -
Rogue Angels Hilarious and creative theme that is just histerical i love it WTG good luck in the contest!
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This has great rhyme and flow. It also tells a good story. I guess it did make me smile because it is on the humerous side but laughter ... for some reason no. Beautiful rhyme and flow though. I'm so tired it may be impossible to make me laugh.
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Very nice. Such good wording and use of those words. Done very well. Thank you for entering.
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nice write
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Nice work- kind of ironic haha
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Hey there. My mistake for not being clear.
I meant
They stole away the shaded moon
Holding in every snicker and laugh
instead of "the stole away the shaded moon.:
I like this very much and apologize if I was confusing in my earlier comment.
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Good write...
Very well written, had a nice flow to it.
Thanks for entering.
Good Luck
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Very Good. Really good rhyme and flow to the poem.
Well done and good luck in my contest. -
"The stole away, the shaded moon
Holding in every snicker and laugh"
hmmmm..... I want to read they stole away....
I will come back to this beauty. Love the rhyme you have going on here. -
Wow. haha This is good. I love the ending too! I think that the title definietly fits this poem perfectly too. The story line is also very good! hehe... my mind is still in the poem actually (which is good). Great imagery and I love Satan's roll in this! Thank you so much for entering my contest and taking such an interesting play on the prompt! And best of luck to you in having entered!!
Alex -
Oh god...
haha. That cracked me up truly. Definitely my type of humor. I wasn't expecting it when I clicked on it, but I was thoroughly amused, if such a phrase is necessary. See? This is why angels need to stay in heaven. Otherwise we get horny angels having orgies in the middle of bars and there's no way to arrest them for publc fornication! Such a crime... Either way, I loved the write. It really brightened up my day. Good luck!
Sincerely,
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It's a funny poem with a nice rhythm to it.
Well done! -
This is hilarious ...
but it might get you excommunicated.
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VERY unique!!! I enjoyed this A LOT and the last line gave me the best laugh I've had all day!!
Top-notch writing.
Best of luck and thanks for entering!
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The imagery works well. Suprise to me that the cussing acutally works in this poem, it normally does not. Greta job
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Hmmm well this was certainly interesting, I was quite sure where you were going with it, a lesson in morals perhaps, but I proved wrong. Anyways thanks for the entry into this humble little contest...... good luck with it
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I love the line 'to each other, they were pie a-la-mode'. Well done. Best wishes and thank you for entering.
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Yes I do agree that last line is a kicker.
Love a story told in rhyming poetry....this was quite an enjoyable read and it holds from start to finish.
Thanks for entering this into my contest, Fantastic write!
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Hahahaha....
Aw....another great early morning laugh. I like this poem.
'Specially the last few lines. "Home you bitches, I'm bolting the door" Hahaha....
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