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The Small Things



There were the small things:
the shades of your smile,
the tones of your voice,
the prosody of your touch.

There was the insignificance
of your presence,
the implicitness
of our connection,
invisible and thrumming,
innocent like a Sunday in June.

Yes, there were small things:
Now they are distant,
no longer in reach.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 27, 2008

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    Ah..this is indeed a heartfelt write bringing the depth into the piece..you are very honest while stating the story of the life here..well done....


  • The Unknown Poet1
    April 24, 2008

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