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Shines Darkly

When the sky falls unto the earth
And the night swirls in memory
Of things that once were -
Still I will hold you in my arms.

Still my voice will whisper
Promises in your ears
Still I will study your
Soft, sad green eyes -

But though the sun shines darkly on the earth
Never will I leave you.

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^-^ Hopefully I did well here - I don't actually know.

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  • Pleasantly Insane
    April 28, 2008
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    Good job. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    Love the sentiment of this poem you did a wonderful job here. Riftkin