When the sky falls unto the earth
And the night swirls in memory
Of things that once were -
Still I will hold you in my arms.
Still my voice will whisper
Promises in your ears
Still I will study your
Soft, sad green eyes -
But though the sun shines darkly on the earth
Never will I leave you.
Author notes
^-^ Hopefully I did well here - I don't actually know.
A contest entry
- What would you say? by Riftkin.
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Good job. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Love the sentiment of this poem you did a wonderful job here. Riftkin




