Walk down these screaming halls,
Hearing such painful words.
Walk past the people she knows,
Fearing to cry in their presence.
No one sees the dead look in her eyes,
No one hears her, silent screams and cries.
Crippled with her dearest betrayal,
Heartache behind the mask she puts on everyday.
Each day she wakes up to hide herself again,
Each night she lets her tears sing her sorrowful lullaby.
Tainted heart full of her sorrowful treachery,
This angel’s wings are torn and broken.
She’s falling, falling down, to the cold hard ground,
She doesn’t have the strength to stand again.
She crumbling, crumbling, down in herself.
She’s broken,
Can’t stand to smile again.
A contest entry
- tears, fears, and everything inbetween by nobodys-girl.
700 points, ended May 4, 2008, 55 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this poem is amazing. it's just....amazing. no other comment. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Absolutely loved it...pour your heart out; this poem makes me think of "wake me up" by evanescence; you should really look up the lyrics, theyre amazing...
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This is bloody brilliant!
One of the best I have read.
It puts a real mental image in my mind.
I love how the emotion flows and fits so well.
This is truly amazing in so many wayys!
GREAT!!!!!!!
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