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Baby, It's Fact~

You live in an empty world
Where nothing matters but yourself
You're alone
And you know
Nothing good can come from being so cold.

They say
Your love's like winter
Cold and Dark and Powerful
And baby; You're no better
You're chilled inside
And your soul is as black
As the nothingness in you.

[There's a better way of life than the one you claim to live]

Baby, It's Fact
Hell's a dream compared to life with you.

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SherriBaby--x

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  • DeAnges
    April 30, 2008

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    I want to write a really good comment for this poem, but I can't think of anything for some reason. I did very much enjoy it though, and I love the last line.