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Dreaming eyes

Behind her green glow, a promising country.
Earthly wisdom embodied into a woman's soul.

For a man, a life-time study,
unless he travels into her gaze, tickles
his own chords, inside his labyrinth
of confusing functies, disentangles
into an unfolded dream of peace...

Mysteries breath dreams,
pregnant of hope.
The gentle power of an objective look.

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Picture Inspired; picture: no_title_xD_by_CaradelNeil

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  • quack silver member
    April 24, 2008
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    wow this is really good
    i love you


  • MysticalRayne
    April 23, 2008

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    This is beautiful and the closest to what I was looking for thank you for your entry and good luck