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Love Like Candy

I need you more and more each day..
your love is like candy..
I just ever can get enough..
addicted to you love..
as every day I think about you..
your stuck on my mind like glue..
when I'm not talking to you..
I'm missing you..
wishing and wanting to hare your voice
and see your smile..

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this is more of a free wright thin a poem.. I just put down what was popping into my mind..

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  • VerminVomit
    April 22, 2008

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    pretty good...very good (better than your cupcake poem)

    ive felt this way before too
    i like the lines 3,4,9,10 the most...all so awesome...
    theres nothing bad about it...