Like a feather unanchored
shooting off
into a blue oblivion
blinded by sunshine
and lighter than air
my heart condenses
on the gentle,
glowing surface
of His beautiful, upturned ocean
and we rise
like the light of a flashlight
to the glorious
ceiling of clouds.
Author notes
happily heavensent
In a list
A contest entry
- Sunday Morning Hope by ScarletO.
300 points, ended April 26, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Now, this is a nice feeling to feel. You have taken the reader on a nice little journey with your well penned imagery.
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gorgeous! inspiring!
Absolutely GORGEOUS! Very uplifting! A beautiful inspiring write that makes me want to "go there."
Perfect word choice and it sings like a song lifting me to that higher / special place.
many blessings *stomps
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Very, very good! But perhaps "untethered" as opposed to "unachored?" I don't think the latter is a word. - oce
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un-"anchor"ed... but oooh, I like untethered too cause then I get the rhyme out of it. hmmm
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