Every time I see your beautiful face
All I can do is softly smile and blush
As I walk over to hold you close to me
It makes me forget all my problems
While I stand there with you in my arms
An amazing feeling overflowing from my heart
But yet even then that isn't the end
As I feel my body flooding with happiness
You're the one that makes my life worth living
And if that wasn't enough by itself
You're the one who makes every moment
A moment that will never be forgotten
So as we stand here in each others arms
Even if we died here and went above
It wouldn't really matter to me because
Your the one that I will forever love!!!
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A contest entry
- Write what's on your heart. by broken-colours.
500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Looks like we had the same train of thought for our entries
hehe. Best of luck to you in the contest 
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Awww! this is so adorable! You wrote this poem in such a way that it wasn't cliche or anything. =) great job and good luck in this contest.
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stunning. i love this whole poem, its amazing. keep up the good work
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"You're the one that makes my life worth living
And if that wasn't enough by itself
You're the one who makes every moment
A moment that will never be forgotten"
I'm very happy that you've found yourself loved and in love. It's a wonderful feeling, isn't it? You've expressed it beautifully in this poem of yours. Thanks for entering. -
Outstanding....good luck
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I like this one better then the first. ^^
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