A rose may be withered,
May be bruised
Deep within,
A heart still beats
Beautiful
Author notes
04-22-08
A contest entry
- Echo ~ 10 people, 15 words by In Too Deep1.
420 points, ended April 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice poem. So few words that say so much. I often feel this way. Thanks for sharing
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aww, so sweet & short, this is filled with emotion, great write
NL
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ooooh, darling, I really like this!
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Great take on the prompt. Beautiful flow and message. An enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.
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This is a really nice thought in short form. It makes me think:
the beauty is not in the rose, the beauty is in the petals, spreading themselves to reveal the true beauty of a heartfelt smile.
Good write.
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poor rose
beauty shines,
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