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“Cry not my love”

• Cry not my love
For we only part for a short time
Soon we’ll be together
In love with one another
We part only for a while
Don’t go in pains so agile

• Love is our bound
And in love of you I’m so fond
Like the feet of a compasses we apart
But still we have love in our heart
As I in distance go away
You lean and hearken right away
As if you speak and whisper in my ear
How brave is our love so dear

• A compasses without being fixed cannot endure
Both feet will collapse and fall for sure
Its love that keeps us combined
Having each other in our mind
Even if parting for a day or so
We will converge once again to glow
So cry not my love I pray
I won’t be forever away

• Besides after a long distance
I still won’t cease from existence
For as much as I sail away
After that limit I won’t be able to stray away
You from your center will lean to me
Yet attaching me to thee
Then time will come and we will adhere
Shed no tear, for I will be back my dear

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  • Mallig gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Wonderful, this could speak to so many kinds of separations... this is touching. I really liked "How brave is our love so dear".


  • painfully amazing
    April 25, 2008
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    =] this is really good. (L)


  • risewiththesmoke
    April 22, 2008

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    this is sorta the situation im in. good description. thanks for entering