Who led you to believe...
that you could thus proceed?
Sticking mellow rose with these?
A contest entry
- Echo ~ 10 people, 15 words by In Too Deep1.
420 points, ended April 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A wonderfully penned, out of the box take on the prompt, leading one to ponder. An enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.
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a good poem written here, ah but the rose it needs protection from the dangers of life, and so the thorns are there, like sentries
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Ian, your mind is so powerful...I never in all of my years looked at it quite that way. Wow, you're so right, its not the bad thing one usually perceives it to be...thanks for that new take on it lol
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