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Divorced



"forever"
  was ours,
preserved
    in solid ice...



global warming happened.

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Prompt: Solid ice

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Excellent job in creativity and metaphor...very well done in brevity and strength...excellent ending...
    Congrat's on the well deserved trophy.
    Best!
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  • dustookie2
    April 22, 2008

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    Wow i saw the title and had to come in and read...Brilliant take on the prompt and so well crafted...in a few words you have said all there is to say.....Well done and CONGRATULATIONS on the SILVER.


  • In Too Deep1
    April 22, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt. Congrats on silver

  • phoenixonfire
    April 22, 2008

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    hahah...i dont know why but this one made me laugh out loud LOVED THIS!! Excellent and painful imagery!!! AWESOME!!!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    pri