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your way

You inject your love
through indifference

grown upon a white

                    leaf-like face

                                        of sympathy

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PROMPT: Beautiful thorns on an ugly rose

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  • In Too Deep1
    April 22, 2008

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    Beautiful take on the prompt. great alliteration. An enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    April 22, 2008
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    This is really beautiful and so gentle