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Bad echoes preserve good


anger repulse
keep peace intact
dress ugly, beauty unsoiled
scare away tormentor
looked upon cruel

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    your immagery is just very strong to bring the image of the sentiments raised here..a wonderful write indeed....


  • z etoile
    June 28, 2008

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    Very short and sweet and intense great job on this write and thank you for sharing your work with us. I liked the second last line:

    scare away tormentor


  • In Too Deep1
    April 22, 2008

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    This is an intensely emotional take on the prompt. wonderful imagery and brevity. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    April 22, 2008

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    Some really strong wording brother and deep imagery. Well done, very well done


    Cindy