Pierced
like subtle songs
sang in deaths
reunioun with birth
painfully scarred
~destiny reversed~
Author notes
Beautiful thorns on an ugly rose
The context is destiny...it goes on a particular pathway just like thorns on beautiful rose but when thorns look more appealing than the rose..the destiny changes or reversed...where death is beautiful and so is birth...it can sometimes feel ugly.
A contest entry
- Echo ~ 10 people, 15 words by In Too Deep1.
420 points, ended April 22, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a very well written take on the prompt. Abstract and filled with a great depth of thought! Congrats on the silver!!
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A deep and thought provoking take on the prompt. I enjoyed this riddled writ. An enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.
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