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Superficial Rose

Pinpricks of beauty
tranform the obscure reality
of an ugly weed
into the superficial rose

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  • In Too Deep1
    April 22, 2008

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    Great alliteration and flow. Wonderful take on the prompt. An enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.