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the wolves

the wolves
you hear their paws pounding behind you
their breath hard and yet soft
they follow close yet far behind
closing in on you
their prey the only prey theyve had for weeks

you trip
the close down on you
you feel their teeth ripping tearing
and then it all goes black

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uhh i realize it doesnt rhyme but its how i write

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  • greyhaime silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    rhyming isn't everything. and often I enjoy most that don't. thank you for sharing this with us here. line 8 needs a y on the "the" I am assuming you meant to say they close down.
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  • demonic66
    April 22, 2008
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    i love this