Married, we were
As young as 17
Lovers, we were
At least at heart
Home, we built
Of wood and concrete
Walls, we built
Of hatred and lust
Family, we became
With child after child
Strangers, we became
With lie after lie
Fighting, it began
For days on end
Hurting, it began
For love to end
Divorce, it is
Gods marriage had ceased
Reality, it is
God save us please
A contest entry
- I'm in the mood for ANYTHING! by ForeverLastingComa.
550 points, ended April 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh wow!
this is simply stunning... left me speechless! emotions here ran deep and imagery was awesome... the words you've used was like totally perfect in this case! do keep penning kays!
AWESOME!
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A good poem. These things happen very often these days. Sadly. Wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Keep writing
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Awsome write, I guess at first all things seems alll perfect in every realtionship untill you figure whether it was love or lust..i like this way how you sontinuously repeatd how things is/were with you 2..swdome write..i especially liked the ending
Divorce, it is
Gods marriage had ceased
Reality, it is
God save us please
I just like that word ceased..I don't know why..Thanks For Entering My Contest And Good Luck
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