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Life Line Extension 420

the thought that we two
might learn to love
and that we could
rest in the silence
of our sins without
anyone trying to tear
us apart like they
always seem to do

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  • Condemd RyeZing
    April 22, 2008

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    It's short. Not a bad thing. Believe me. I think it has a ton of emotion in just those few lines. Nicely written. It's a shame that in life people always try to keep you from what you want the most.