Love, work, academics;
so many things to take up my time.
I feel as though I have no time left,
for thoughts and other luxuries.
I know that I am blessed beyond words;
I have no doubt that I am loved.
It just seems as though the entire world,
in all its rage, is crashing down around me.
Still, I know it's not that bad.
I have my friends, my family, and my God;
they will see me through the hard times.
As well, they will celebrate with me,
through all the good times in my life.
My love will keep me refreshed,
my work, will make me strong,
and my academics will give to me,
a sense of accomplishment;
knowing that I have done something with my life.
A contest entry
- Write what's on your heart. by broken-colours.
500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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Very nice thoughts you have
Best of luck to you in the contest
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It was good. It's a good poem to put in a contest. I dunno what I should say good luck for... But good luck, anyways. I don't really know what people enter contests for.
-Mixed Up Alien (I can't find my spaceship! Aaaaah!)
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To be quite honest, I don't really know either, but at least it is something to do!
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good job
You did a very good job. You sure can write Great. -
Great job Adam! Seems like everyone goes through that in his own way...you put that in great writing...
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Don't I know how you feel. It's important to remember all you have when you start thinking negatively. I always forget. Thanks for reminding me Well done.
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I can definitely relate to this! Though everything is just fine and dandy, sometimes a hard time will arise and make everything else look bleak and full of despair. We need to recognise the smaller problems and not let them overcome; trust in God, lean on Him, and He'll help you through. Great job! Thanks for entering.
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I like how a lot of feelings are going against each other here, how you know so well your life, and feel happy with it, but at the same time how it feels like it's all pressing down on you. Really liked the last couple of lines =D
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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