Every moment feels alive.
Every day awake.
I’m uplifted with every chore I conclude.
Sun isn’t as hot as it used to be.
Pain and aches don’t reach too deep nowadays
All and each come and knock at my veneer.
Justly I have an enlisting of them all in my notebook
Cruel it is,but they’re less somehow
And I’m -
Weightless
Uninhibited
Why is it so ?
How? I ask.
Because-
The only one who gets my answer and me
Today and everyday from nowon
Is You.
You’ve become more
Nobody but you.
You reach
You touch
You hold
You own,and you own ,and you own......Me.
A contest entry
- Write what's on your heart. by broken-colours.
500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great expression
Best of luck in the contest!
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Interesting concept you've portrayed in your poem. Even though everyday life can get one down, you find your relief in the one who owns you. Very nice job! Thanks for entering.
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