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Fucked Emotions

Fucked Emotions

By: Julia Clark

 

 

As I smile at my emotions,

Drinking the propel of your eyes

And licking the lipstick

Of the question why?

 

I lie to myself,

Denying you,

Playing hooky

With what’s true.

 

I am in the mood

To unbutton your

Shirt heart,

And roll up

the sentimental

Of your ego sleeves.

The way you grow tissue leaves

And magically thieve my greed.

 

To engage love with you,

Make vowels

With I am restless

With out you.

 

I went on a mind stroll,

To meditate my feelings slowly

And a auction sell

Of my antique

Storage purse,

Inside was

My feelings

That I let die

And then the winds cried.

 

Because you pulled up

To my heart break

And shut the doors

To everything is going

To be okay,

And carried me

To the piano patio

Of live Cairo.

 

As the covers of emotions

Just start touching me

And dotting my blushes

With periods.

 

And at this very moment

I looked in to your eyes,

And I saw the virginity

Of my love life being broken.

 

As my heart shook hands with

Yours.

I am on tour

With my clothes being on,

Making love

To I am all the answers

To what

Went

W

R

O

N

G

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

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  • HoneyFire
    May 8, 2008

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    this is wonderful!
    deep and real.
    Again you have shown your talent.
    Great job and continue with your blessing


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Confused...

    I liked this poem, although a few times I began to feel lost.. This style of writing is new to me, so maybe hard for me to understand for that reason. Anyhow, I gather your heart speaks of deep passionate love Best of luck in the contest

    • thanks hon yea if you read more of me you will grasp more and more i will return ur favor shortly


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    Beautiful...

    You're heartbeats amazingly of your love.
    Thanks for sharing, and your inspiration. Peace~

    Mushy King.


  • broken-colours
    April 22, 2008

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    I'll excuse the fact that the poem has a curse word in the title because the poem itself is superb. I love the constant use of metaphors and the painful tug at the reader's heart throughout the poem. Excellent job; words bow at your touch. Thanks for entering.


  • D Saul So Sexy
    April 22, 2008

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    nice forget this ya boi about to join a contest it makes you get in touch with your creative side Mrs. Jazz i like this a whole lot.

    Good Luck In The Contest

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