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After Everything Else


On the floor-

a letter,
  never sent

torn
...into pieces

jumbled words,
  of his heart




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  • Nicolette gold member
    April 22, 2008
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    This is lovely...and perhaps a is the best comment to leave here, Mal.

    ~ Nicolette

  • phoenixonfire
    April 22, 2008
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    Very sad and painful!! U made very well use of the prompt!! good one...

    all the best
    pri


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 22, 2008
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    So beautifully adorned... x