birth certificate ruptured
by post partum depression
but patched by recipe
of sharing b-6 between...
Author notes
good look is not what to look forward to; Isaiah 65:11
comment with thoughtful absorption
without emoticons outside plant/animal likeliness
so NO applause symbol look, please, thank you
A contest entry
- 10 ~ 15 ~ Go! by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Deeply realistic and grasping... x
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what can grow around...
Lavender Butterfly applicably blinked for
your estimation brings a match of this from my mouth now. I was aiming in time to have it eyed as such, as well as written.
I'm interested in the array of reviews,
babies are my subject
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Great take on the prompt. I always enjoy your writs because of the depth and actual relation to real life. An enjoyable read.
Babies should be all of our business. Although forgotten, it STILL takes a village to raise a child. -
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In Too Deep1 worthwhile to be considered too
thanks for your pleasure in my keying in on practical poetry by which I keep opening...
we can assert extended families association out to society, inserting though the core from which intense love for one another is essential. ~
compensation can be artificial if the only reliance,
babies are my subject
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