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Missing Notes

Like worded papyrus
buried beneath days,

leaving cryptic stanzas
about this life-

brittle poetry re-discovered

Author notes

15 amazing words



Prompt ~ Torn paper

A contest entry

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  • MahoganyFlow
    April 22, 2008

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    You are so talented. I was drawn in by the 1st 2 lines. You have a very interesting mind. Keep Writing!

  • phoenixonfire
    April 22, 2008

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    Oh ma god!! That was so awesome..I love the refrences here! U took LBs prompt so neatly! Great one...

    pri


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 22, 2008
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    Truly creative and profoundly crafted... x