Being human,
we became friends,
becoming friends,
I gave companionship,
knowing you,
I discovered love.
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Prompt ~ Torn paper
A contest entry
- 10 ~ 15 ~ Go! by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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What a lovely take on the prompt! Very subtle and love filled!! Good luck..
pri
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This is truly wonderful... x
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presentably fitting...
the shred of past pasted to a new direction is a nice collage effect of lines
the sincerity of existence is not banged or begged but happens gradually for a good glue of breaking bread per se with consideration of all that can be shared it seems.
nicer than just dessert sweetness but thorougness for no stain on stationery appears,
babies are my subject
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