She reduced tears
to saline parchments
submerged silently.
These days,
she sleeps over
~dead letters~
A contest entry
- 10 ~ 15 ~ Go! by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 22, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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congratulations on gold!
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Such an amazing and out of the box take on the prompt. A most enjoyable read, and I wish you the best in the comp.


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Ur luck worked
Thanks...
pri
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truly vivid and riveting... x
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Thanks a bunch
pri
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