Earthquakes come, the tremors arise
My comfort, looking into your eyes
Waters become dry, the mud can no longer cry,
Earth fades away; her time has come to fly
Your love flows through my veins
You help to ease all the pain.
Stars from heaven fall to the ground,
Now the abyss arises, without a sound
When our hands touch, true warmth is found there
Heat from hearts the glowing pairs.
The people shout, man hates man
Human nature fades, now the animals set in.
They might have lost their way, but we still hold true
The world may end, but I will stay here, forever with you
A contest entry
- Write what's on your heart. by broken-colours.
500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Breathtaking... and I was also stumped at first... What a creative way to grasp our attentions
The End - Nothingness...
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Wow. You had me stumped for a moment with the black, but I'm slow and I figured it out! =D I really liked the poem. I like the ending, and the whole ideas that you express. =) Good luck in the contest.
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This is simply beautiful. The feeling of love despite hardships radiates from your words. The flow is smooth, the wording poetic and sweet - with a hint of pain, and the rhyming natural. Thanks for entering.
<3
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