The Car swerves
Around the bend
I just can't wait
For This To end
Pounding Heart
Screaming mind
Why Can't I
Leave this behind?
Taking that sharp turn
From the corner of my eye
Seeing the car flip over
Feeling I might die
Around the bend
I just can't wait
For This To end
Pounding Heart
Screaming mind
Why Can't I
Leave this behind?
Taking that sharp turn
From the corner of my eye
Seeing the car flip over
Feeling I might die
Author notes
i have no idea when this started.
and don't get me wrong, i can take sharp turns.
with my eyes closed.
and sometimes i hyperventalate if its reallyyy bad.
i used to love joyriding when i was a littler kid.
but now fear grips me whenever someone takes a sharp turn in a car, if i take one on a bike, anything. its so weird... :[
A contest entry
- Phobia - What's Yours? by Midnight-x-Rose.
433 points, ended May 1, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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Hmmm though you have explained there is no exact name for the fear of turning corners, I can relate to it in many ways, as I don't like turning corners when you are going fast as yes, you do feel like you are going to swerve and crash, or be thrown upside down... then again I think it doesn't help when I see this happen in car simulation PS2 games. I really can relate.
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awww jess! i know what you mean. i'm terrified of waves and wind. i hate swings and fans, they're scary. "
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Hmm interesting phobia. I myself have not yet learnt to drive because i just.. am too scared too lol. Nicely written though, good luck in the contest
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thats the thing lol
i dont drive yet
its when im in the car with someone else
its crazy
haha
&&thx!:]
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