Droopy Eyelids keep me wondering
Wondering of how the sound
(The sound!)
Of your voice keeps my world going round
(Around!)
They entangle my thoughts
and put me to
(sleep)
Where my dreams
Keep me nigh
Till midmorning's
(Peak)
They send me through twists
(And turns! and turns!)
I savor this bliss
(For you I yearn)
Goodbye?
Alas?
My mind won't clear
Because without
(you)
Loneliness resides
(here)
Author notes
I wrote this in Two minutes.
I was on myspace, typing a bulletin, about to say goodbye because I was about to go to bed, and I felt poetic all of a sudden, so there you have it!
So...how did I do?
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droopy eyelids
~~~~Droopy Eyelids
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lol this is pretty good...
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Haha thanks
It's a amazing what us humans do when boredom strikes
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LOL
isn;t it amaizng sweetie when you are on myspace & inspiration hits. I know how that goes I always have inspiration when I log into myspace to post a poem or least have a poetic phrase come popping into my head. any ways this wasa beautifully penned poem and I like the repetition irt had and also your sheer depth and quality of your wording. any ways excellent job here sweetie & keep on penning away.
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It is!
Yay MySpace!
Thank you so much
I was just saying goodnight and BAM!
Instant Inspiration!
Yay!
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