The moonlight sparkling, shining bright;
our hands embracing, holding tight;
the quietness of autumn air
reminds me of a careless care-
to be with you, will make things right.
Inside our tiny midnight land
there lives a joy so great, so grand-
a joy that elsewhere is not found,
that solely is upon this ground,
a joy with night-both hand in hand.
While we sit and starlights glimmer,
ambiance will never simmer.
While the moon is ever out
while we stray and walk about
your smile will then always shimmer.
A contest entry
- Shimmer by Everwind Rising.
1100 points, ended April 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very sweet darling.
I like it. -
More good work!..miss you!
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thanks, both of you. I appreciate the encouragement.
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I like the reflective mood expressed here.
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