Spice of flavor
Scent of flowers
Sounds of frivolous
ambient just right
Late evening bite
Author notes
Prompt ~ Green tea and Jasmine
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 21, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Bandits United
Wonderful take on the prompt. I really remember being stuck when I saw that prompt, so I admire those who can write on hard prompts
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This sounds like the perfect way to snuggle up with your sweetheart on a quiet evening.
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This is great! It makes me want to have a nice hot cup of tea.
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Definitely reminds me of tea--this makes me kind of thirsty, actually, which is quite impressive for a poem that makes no explicit reference to drink or thirst. I don't really like "stage is set," though. It's a rather cliche phrase, but it also calls up an image of something rehearsed, which just doesn't fit here.
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Deeply creative and engaging... x
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Lovely setting...like the last line...
All the best!
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ooohhh, this is beautiful!
wonderful write and goo luck
take care
stephanie =)
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