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papillon

Is there no heart
in this cage of bones.
I fear that moths
are devouring
my insides.
With nothing but a faint
dust trail left behind.

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the synchronicity behind this was uncanny

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  • Plastic Dreams
    April 26, 2008

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    mmmmm

    this is what i like from you. in depths of dramatized, or belittled disguise that keeps it harsh to your side.

    cage of bones.
    moths are devouring
    my insides.

    and dust trails. signify.

    beautiful. MORE