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Where Did You Go?

Gone are the days of sweetness, of love.
Wander and sorrow are what fill my mind.
Where did you go? Why did you leave?
I'm torn between loving who you were and not liking you
because of who you have become.
Nights spent alone, tears filled in my eyes.
Dreams of your alter-ego, make me smile once again.
Fights are what our time together consists of.
You see honey, my heart misses that dream that you seemed to make real
and wants who you are now, to go away.

Author notes

"I Don't miss you, I miss the person I thought you were" - Prompt

Eh...Could use some work but these are feelings straight from my heart right now...maybe I should let him read it?

sister! - leslielovesthomas

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 11, 2008

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    I know exactly how you feel with this and second it in many ways, very strong and this reminds me a lot of the experience myself and my ex had...and how I long for it and yet at the same time dont.


  • CinematicInk
    May 6, 2008
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    a very heartfelt poem. i loved reading this!


  • reckless abandon
    May 5, 2008

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    I wish I couldn't relate to this, but in some ways I can. I like how you've put this into words, thanks for entering the contest.


  • Heavens Child
    May 3, 2008

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    It is sad when people change so much they become unrecognizable to us anymore. Best wishes and thank you for entering.


  • Butterfly24
    May 3, 2008
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    wonderful write... very strong and powerful.. best in the contest


  • CinematicInk
    April 23, 2008
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    could you post what family member you wish to be in your author's notes? thanks!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    April 22, 2008

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    Awwww straight from your heart...no good

    maybe..maybe you should get him to read it..

    Heartfelt emotional words darl



    Hope you do well in the contest


    Cin


  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008
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    the true or raw feelings that come from your heart are usually the best. Personally to be honest, I think if yoyu are feeling like this and he doesn't know, even though it may hurt he should know.

    • Blooming Poet
      April 21, 2008
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      is this person your lover???
      because sometimes the only way to make them believe is to brutally honest about it. Do not tip toe around what you are feeling, say what you need dto say


      • leslielovesthomas
        April 21, 2008
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        He's my fiance...

        • Blooming Poet
          April 21, 2008

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          okay, this may not be my place. so feel free to tell me that. But personally you should not be gettting married if you are having the feeling you have described.

          • leslielovesthomas
            April 21, 2008
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            Oh, I've thought about that...We moved in with his best friend and ever since then he's been trying to be all macho and shit...He acts different when we're in front of HIS friends.

            • Blooming Poet
              April 21, 2008
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              once again if this is not my place tell me. But again
              If you talk to him and explain that he will either

              1. not listen
              2. listen but not care
              3. listen and care

              If he does 1 or 2 he obviously has some things to work out before he should ever be good enough for you.
              If he does 3, then obviously he cares and hes just being a usual male.


    • leslielovesthomas
      April 21, 2008
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      I've tried to tell him but he doesn't want to believe that he has changed...


  • jcat gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    I think that you should totally let him read it and than hit him over the head with the computer!!! This was an excellent take on the prompt!! Well done and best of luck


  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008
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    prompts are up


  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008
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    and you haven't even seen the prompt yet.


    • leslielovesthomas
      April 21, 2008
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      I've been on a roll lately! Everything anyone has been giving me has sparked a new creation


      • leslielovesthomas
        April 21, 2008
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        Haha...I just re-read that sentence...totally incorrect! I call myself an English major lol


  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008
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    happy to be here???

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