Slumber
Silent, warm
Tossing, turning, dreaming
I feel so at peace.
Sleeping
Author notes
Modern Cinquain
A contest entry
- Unrhymed Form Poetry by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended April 23, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank youu for entering my short poems contest. It is so true when you can have a peaceful sleep how great it can feel.
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Lovely. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you.
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nice. i find cinquians so hard because they're so short but you've managed to write a nice little piece within those limits. well done.
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Your write sometimes they can be quite a pan, but I like playing around with them, it sort of forces you to expand your vocabulary to find words that fit and convey your point nicely. Thanks for the comment.
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