Caged animal so beautiful here
A dove tagged to confinement
Let the world rest in silence
And let us hear its mournful song
Release me
O World
I don't belong...
So gloriously she sings
And we keep her to suffer...
Author notes
option 6
A contest entry
- prewrites by Melissa Gayle.
725 points, ended April 21, 2008, 14 entries
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I love him ♥
Comments
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wow such a cage how beautiful the words will forever be locked in plac
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Oh dear... This is... Sad but beautiful at the same time... I really love your imagery... So... Gloomily... Alluring...
*sniffles*
Nice poem, I don't know why it drew so much emotion out of me...
Thanks for entering &
Best of luck
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i like it. its simple but sad. great job. good luck in the contest
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Wow that is good! So short and meaningful! Good luck in the contest!!!
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simply b-e-a-u-tiful
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Thank ya darlin'!!
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awsome write, enjoyed reading it a lot...thank you for actually following the rules =) good luck by the way
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This is beautiful but filled with sorrow as well.
Its balance works very well.
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