I walk alone on this dirty road,
Please oh please help im on my own?
Kill me now just let me bleed...
Im tired of this hell..Let me be freed.
The name on my leg and in my wrist..
Carved and bloody, severed and twist.
A fountain of blood washes away the pain..
Just a feeling of regret so ill sever again?
The lies and truth has now clasped together,
I never should have believed "Forever"
my skin it burns my hand it shakes,
im trying to write this note you'll soon take.
"Forever wasn't real to me,
and now im gone cant you see..
The memory's left in my head are leaving me.
Goodbye
im fucking dead..."
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Comments
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Woah.. The ending so breathtaking I love it =D
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awww so sad, can really relate to feeling this way though.
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this is a great piece....I'm so excited i got to read it!!!!
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This is a great poem! I really like that you rhymed.
I love poems that rhyme. It a sad poem, but it really good. 
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Trust me... I know this feeling all too well, some people and things are just too hard to forget, I learnt that one the hard way too.
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So sad =( You are really good at the side poetry side of things, there is no doubt of that!
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WOW!!!
Great write..so much emotion and great diction...it didn't feel forced at all. Also very creativily written...I could see and feel what you were saying...Loved it...keep it up...~Josh
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This lil angels going to bite you josh!! grrrrrr whatch out
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Theres so much I could say,
So much I wouldnt mind carving hatred and pain into your heart. How can I say this is well writen when my heart has recovered, to only find you trying to open the wound. My sympathy has lessend and my body and soul aches for new begining.
When you let yourself go that is when you will be freed and no I'm not talking about death. your smart figure out my riddle of life, It's what your heart yearns for.
Im not falling agian davis not this time.
This time,
Your words are only ashes....
But I will always care about you
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