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epistemology

what I know
fits on a bar napkin
the text of my life:

concise angled penscratch
with the wet ring of my drink
circumscribing
the philosophy of my youth.

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  • pine-needles
    May 21, 2008

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    wonderful again. witty poke at yourself, and while obviously couldn't literally be true (even with my miniscule handwriting), in another sense, so very true of all of us. love the detail of the "wet ring of my drink" - that made the poem for me, followed by the "concise angled penscratch" and that it's a "bar napkin." you've really got a knack for this poetry thing.