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Lift Me Up

You came along and removed my shroud
Lift me up above the clouds.
Make me feel lighter than air,
And actually gave me a reason to care.
Out with the old, in with the new
Over the past and fixated on you.
You make me want to no longer hide,
But to shout in triumph and live in pride.
You lifted me out've the hole I was trapped in,
And freed me of every taboo sin.
You are the release that I have so long sought,
You maker your way into my every waking thought.
This force has got to be sanctioned from above...
I am beginning to enjoy the emotion known as love




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  • TheDeadMan
    April 22, 2008

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    I do. but i cant. I am..uhhhh...how can i put this?..hmmm.. i donno. oh well. good write. i guess. but i dont know. not my cup of tea. but shit. i dono. kick ass . i guess. but anyways. nice write. to some. very emotional.


  • Desdemona42
    April 21, 2008
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    oh i dont even know what to say
    <3