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Duet

        Two skilled performers,
step on stage,
deep breath,

Her: Soft,
Slow,
Singing the tune of the needy,

Him: Crescendo,
Moving above her sweet melody,

Both: Accelerando,
Song of them,
Tapping their fingers,
to the moderate tempo,

Poco a Poco
Notes recited in the brain,

Her: How could she forget,
So much practice,
Deep into the night,
Attempting the remembrance of the song,

Audi. They sing so perfectly,
together,
him,
raising above her,
delicate calls,
holding her up,
never letting her melody fall,

Both: They smile at each other,
Knowing they love the scene,

Decrescendo,
Slowing down
Forta,
Coming to a stall. . .

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  • willowprincess
    May 23, 2008

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    beautiful! i love the musical metaphor. and great use of musical terms. (i'm a music minor)
    great job.


  • Dashed Hopes1992
    April 23, 2008
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    ITS ABOUT SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!