Everyday is a challenge for me
To awake to a new day is only wakening to darkness
I fight this battle alone in my mind, with no armour
I'm the only person here
Scared and confused,scarred from lifes trials
No peace do I have
Happiness is too far away to grasp
Tears overcome me, but yet I cannot cry
Fears of showing the world my weakness
I put on a show to the world as if to be normal
Inside lays a woman with great sadness for reasons sometimes, unknown
Trying to understand but too broken inside to know
Author notes
This has been a good write for me. I needed to get some things out.Thanks, I needed this vent.
Please tell me what you think
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I think there are a couple of words that you could have limited your use of them to once, rather than twice within two lines, and there are one or two places where you've forgotten to put in a space or an apostrophe. Other than that this was lovely, thank you
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GREAT VENTING!
We all have those days when its best to let out everything so it doesnt feel like we are about to explode inside. Lord knows a lot of people never do and trust me it hurts worse than anything to hold it all in. Reading others pain sometimes helps those who feel like they are the only ones with problems. Poetry is a great way to escape from our reality and really tells who we are and what emotion we are having.
Your poem was a great read and I'm sure many who read it will feel what you put into it. Keep venting, it helps and good peotry comes best from true raw emotion.
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