Despairing life everyday
stressed beyond hope
tired of fighting
Depressing thoughts unfold
regretted many decisions
forgetting love's hate
Left Alone
Author notes
Prompt picture Depression by~Fanatic-Love
mountain-woman(5)
My style here is freewrite and I used verbs for the beginning of each line, then using adj and nouns to express what I want to say
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How does this make you feel and can you relate to this
Comments
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Powerful, thanks for your entry
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I love this well done
Simon -
This poem is deep, it says so much in a few words good luck in the contest, and keep writing, -Amy
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This truly sums up my best friend. Depression is an every day war for her.....Wonderful little write here and best of luck....
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I can relate to this unfortunately. Oh well!
Best wishes in life and the contest.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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Very well written with so much truth in words. My best wishes in the contest.
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Amazing. I would of loved to capture this as well as you did. Well done.
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Depressing thoughts unfold
regretted many decisions
forgetting love's hate
Left Alone
bea-U-tiful..!
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I feel the despair in this. Well done!
Good luck
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