In A Bad Mood....
In A Bad Mood....
Marching around and around
Seeing red at every stop
Wondering what every idiot
Is thinking at that moment
My subconscious is thrashing,
Clinging, Twisting
At every turn
My thoughts are
Racing and screaming
At my conscious
What on earth are you doing
Why is everybody making my life hard
Running as fast as I can
Heading home to bury my
Head under my pillow in
Anger.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Very Best!!!!!--contestant vote by TabbyJoy.
600 points, ended May 8, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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Venting in poetry is one of the most beautiful things to get rid of some anger actually. You've done that remarkably well here.
I'd choose another font color to be honest, it's not that readable without highlighting as it is now.
Best of luck!
Leander -
Angry, very angry and true for everyone at some time in their life.
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Yeah...I think everyone can relate to this. Good luck in the contest.
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