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Sensual Persuasion

when the smell
of zinfandel
becomes irrelevant

find shelter
for your eyes

as morning sunrise
whispers lullabies
the fire flies

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  • Tam
    May 7, 2008

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    this is rich...

    and I love the ending with: fire flies...
    very clever as always sir...
    Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me! I’m delighted that YOU are one of my three favorite things! LOL!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Malabu
    April 23, 2008
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    as thought it is a love song...
    I like this poem